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	Date/Time	Made By	Edit Note	Type	Scope
	Apr 15 2009, 1:37 AM EDT	bluesun89		edit	19 words added 13 words deleted
Change: woman. There is an alarm droning. Th title at bottom of screen reads: “THREE MONTHS AGO.”]Male Doll: What’s that sound?Nurse-looking lady: It’s nothing. Please get into your beds.Female Doll: But we haven’t had our shower. We always shower before…Nurse-looking lady: Everything’s all View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2745)
	Apr 15 2009, 1:16 AM EDT	bluesun89	meh	edit	10 words added
Change: [All the little imprint pictures bring us to the previously-ons](alarm droning)Title at bottom of screen reads: “THREE MONTHS AGO”[Several Dolls are being ushered into the pod room by a nurse-looking woman]Male Doll: What’s that sound?Nurse-looking lady: It’s nothing. Please get into your beds.Female View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2739)
	Apr 1 2009, 9:18 PM EDT	bluesun89	Dollhoue italicized	edit
Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details. (Word count: 2728)
	Mar 30 2009, 3:12 PM EDT	bluesun89	Writer/Director added	edit	7 words added
Change: Written and Directed by Stephen S. DeKnightOriginal Airdate: 02/20/09(alarm droning)Title at bottom of screen reads: “THREE MONTHS AGO”[Several Dolls are being ushered into the pod room by a nurse-looking woman]Male Doll: What’s that sound?Nurse-looking lady: It’s nothing. Please get into your beds.Female View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2728)
	Mar 30 2009, 3:03 PM EDT	bluesun89	transcript added	edit	2577 words added
Change: Connell: I’ve been with a lot of women, Miss DeWitt. That’s not bragging. That’s just what you would call truth. And not one of them View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2721)
	Mar 29 2009, 7:58 AM EDT	amy_c		create	No content added or deleted.
Change: Created by amy_c Mar 29 2009, 7:58 AM EDT for: no reason given

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