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	Jun 13 2009, 11:10 AM EDT	baudot	Added afternote regarding the similarities between my plot and that in episode 10.	edit	50 words added
Change: HAH! Just days after I wrote this, episode 10 landed and the plots were... well, let me say in my defense that I'd been avoiding spoilers and wasn't expecting the writers to explore the same ground I had anytime so soon. Well done, Team Whedon. You win this round. View changes from previous version. (Word count: 4695)
	Apr 23 2009, 5:53 PM EDT	amy_c	Moved from: Dollhouse Home	move	No content added or deleted.
Change: Moved by amy_c Apr 23 2009, 5:53 PM EDT
	Apr 23 2009, 2:17 PM EDT	baudot		edit	1 word deleted
Change: he's just not as crazy as he could. If he's already started to lose the imprint, then the damage has already started. We need to wipe him before he suffers any more."Ms. DeWitte stood a few moments, lips pursed."Very well. Wipe him."Dominic broke back View changes from previous version. (Word count: 4643)
	Apr 23 2009, 2:16 PM EDT	baudot	tightened wording	edit	1 word deleted
Change: going as crazy as he could. If he's already started to lose the imprint, then the damage has already started. We need to wipe him before he suffers any more."Ms. DeWitte stood a few moments, lips pursed."Very well. Wipe him."Dominic broke back in, "Ms. DeWitte! He...""...is View changes from previous version. (Word count: 4645)
	Apr 23 2009, 2:15 PM EDT	baudot	grammar fix	edit	1 word added
Change: is too intense, sometimes their minds throw off the imprint. They're not the person who did the crime anymore, they don't have to feel the guilt. View changes from previous version. (Word count: 4646)
	Apr 23 2009, 2:12 PM EDT	baudot	tweaked choice of words in one spot	edit	1 word added 1 word deleted
Change: Mrs.Sarah Avakian spun about just in time to see the bronze lamp stand swinging at her. The first strike knocked her out. It took many more to finish the job.- - - - - - - -"How did this happen?" Ms. DeWitte View changes from previous version. (Word count: 4645)
	Apr 23 2009, 2:07 PM EDT	baudot	Typo caught	edit	1 word deleted
Change: was would have said the same thing," said a voice from behind Charlie. He glanced over his shoulder. Victor stepped up beside him. "I take it you're my insurance policy on getting this job done. You're Dr. Avakian. I'm Dr. Avakian. Is anyone here not Vasag Avakian?""Thank goodness View changes from previous version. (Word count: 4645)
	Apr 23 2009, 2:06 PM EDT	baudot	Carriage returns transformed to non-spaces on initial insert. Ugh. Recopied from original draft in google docs to see if that would fix it.	edit	36 words added 20 words deleted
Change: your eMail here. He didn't even tell me the password." "So I see. Were you close?" She sniffed. "Terribly. I loved him with all my heart and soul." Then a bitter choke of laughter. "You didn't love him?" "Not for a long time." "I see... I see. View changes from previous version. (Word count: 4646)
	Apr 23 2009, 1:49 PM EDT	baudot	Initial page insertio by the author. Hope you gents and ladies enjoy it.	edit	4592 words added
Change: "It is," Dr. Saunders replied, "I saw the build. You don't need to be Topher to recognize a single source build. But he's disgusted with View changes from previous version. (Word count: 4633)
	Apr 23 2009, 1:45 PM EDT	baudot		create	No content added or deleted.
Change: Created by baudot Apr 23 2009, 1:45 PM EDT for: no reason given

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